final exam planning

1. this weekend, April 29 & 30
2. outside on a table
3. the making of a clay sculpture
4. Camera, Tripod, clay, flash drive, and iMovie
5. the narration will be in the beginning while the start of the time-lapse starts. A few pictures will appear throughout to document process. a video of wedging clay in the beginning. at the end a series of pictures of final product.

opinions writing

     Have you ever gone into your school, and instantly be taken to the office because of your clothes or hair? No matter if it really is appropriate. You're immediately sent home because you have blue hair, or because you wore a dress!  It seems ridiculous to be called a troublemaker due to your shorts. No matter what the dress code is, it always seems easier for males.

     During the duration of my middle school experience, dress codes were always strict, and the main problem. The teachers would make me feel degraded just because my skirt was an inch too short for the dress codes. my advisory teacher in 6th grade told me i was a "provocative adolescent" because i dyed my hair. I went to look at the dress codes to see if there was a rule against dyed hair, when this happened, i found something interesting. 

     The female dress code had a total of thirty-seven rules, while males had a total of eight. The basics of the female codes were to cover up a certain length to keep from distracting fellow classmates (the male student population). The male rules basically told them not to wear gang-related clothing and not to wear basketball shorts. What! 

     I felt complete rage towards the system, since they generally are telling girls to be non-distracting to males and to not wear clothes that might provoke sexual attention. I don't understand how shoulders, knees, and collarbones are going to be sexually attractive! I asked a female and male friend during middle school to wear shorts shorter than their fingertips. The female was given a day of In School Suspension, while the male was gone unnoticed.

     Later, in the school year, they loosened up their codes to attract less negative attention. And when i say loosened, i mean they gave freedom to hair color only. Almost every person in the school dyed their hair a vibrant color. The school seemed like a much more uplifting place! Imagine what would happen if females were stopped being grilled about showing their skin.

     In Kentucky, a female student was called to the office because of her clothes. This included a tank top covered with a cardigan with jeans. She apparently violated the code by showing her collarbones. the mother of the high school student brought a scarf for the duration of the day, but was sent home for still being inappropriate!

     In China, a student committed suicide in order to protest a dress code. The child was told by the faculty to cut her hair to be in code. The student allegedly jumped out the window. Something should change in dress codes if it leads to suicide!

     If such ridiculous events are occurring (and making the news!), obviously the system should change to create a more equal balance. maybe they should bite down on male student! Or maybe STOP biting down on the average developing body of a female teenager!

In the past, schools have slut-shamed female students based on their fashion. Schools have been known to pressure insecurities into young children minds. Its really ridiculous how strict dress codes can be! And the difference between male and female restrictions are extreme.

    Why do schools have to be so cruel to undeserving students, telling them what their wearing is sexual. Ankles are only "sexual" in the systems' eyes! The codes are just a smaller version of the well known (and too frequent) situation:  blaming a victim of sexual assault because of what they were wearing or their body.

personal essays

1. stuck talking to a bore at a party
2. avoid abstract expressions
3.  

• a question
• strong statement
• good idea why the author feels that way

opinions writing preview activity

immigration laws getting out of hand

1. Editorial
2. Immigration laws
3. the ICE is violent and a result of trump pushing to exterminate minorities.
4. no
5. no, they didn't go back and explain the other side
6. no
7. 1

betsy devas unfit to serve as US secretary of education

1. Reagan Wallace
2.  betsy devos qualification
3.  devos is unqualified 
4.  no
5.  no, doesn't list a reason why she is good
6.  no
7. 3

our great tree is worth saving

1. ian miller
2. dying tree 
3. "this tree really is worth saving, even if it will cost our school some money."
4.  no
5.  yes, explains what would happen if let die
6. no
7. 1

going above the norm for college 

1. jake brien 
2. getting into colleges
3. administration should find easier ways to get into colleges
4.  no
5.  yes, he explains the different ways to get in the colleges you want and different techniques 
6. no
7. 3

importance of physics class

1. Abby ong
2.  physics
3. physics is important
4. no
5. no, keeps promoting physics
6. no
7. 1

SoM peer review

Erika's Photojournalism Blog
paragraph- (50) 5/8-10 ~30
5 quotes- (25)(5) 3/5~15
inverted pyramid-(25) ~ 15
extra credit- 10 points~10
total-70

slo practice

1. proximity
2. prominence
3. paints
4. lack of subject
5. the location
6. background information about the senior games

Malala Yousafzai and Justin Trudeau meet on Sunday, December 31st for a tea party. Yousafzai and Trudeau were also greeted by Ryan Reynolds.

sports portfolio

Alyssa Schukar

Eating disorder, Children

Distance

Lens

Dark

Graphic

Backgrounds

Don’t like,  weak photography

Travis Haughton

Disabilities

Sports

children

Back of head

mergers

signs

faces

quality

don’t like, too many kids

Nick Adams

Handicapped kids

Tightness

Frames

Busy backgrounds

originality

Silhouettes

Like, interesting techniques with distance

Jordan Murph

Sports

Composition

Posed (postcard)

eyecontact

Lighting

Silhouettes

Like, dramatic

Josh Birnbaum

Humor

Focus

skyline

wheels

lighting

Sam Adams

Simple activities

levels

camera man and tripods

composition

Simple shadows

Silhouettes

Don’t like, boring

Carlos Delgado

Disabilities

Clutter

Backgrounds

Color

focus

clouds

don’t like, blurry and cluttered

Justin Mott

Coastal culture

focus

graphic

selective focus

point of view

bacon

like, dramatic

Anthony soufflé

Sports

Surgery (sounds they made)

After the fact

Clutter

humor

tears

don’t like, similar

Daryl Peveto

sports

blur

captions

Diving board

lighting

don’t like, similar

Melissa Golden

people

focus

power lines

underwear

portrait

motion

like, people

focus and balance

tightness, variety, yes, clutter

choosing between techniques and variety

the red car, wasn’t interesting, sky wasn’t interesting.  Gopro is lame, lighting sucks

tennis celebration. Poor compositition

sports

https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/100LFmxiC61WROSc57gTjdCCklMYpa_rtSvYF4Jw5vkc/edit?usp=sharing

inverted pyramid